Post by V L Smith on Dec 3, 2014 12:01:34 GMT -8
The novel is Science Fiction/Fantasy/Horror with a nymphomaniac, an egomaniac, erotica, and violence mixed in just to spice it up. The plot revolves around a small group of young adults as they attempt the difficult, often deadly, initation into their adult society. I am seeking comments about the story construct only. Comments about plot arc, characterizations, dialogue, pacing, conflict, readability, and any other facet of the story will be carefully considered. I will do a major rewrite based on comments from the beta readers. Hope to find 10 who can have thier comments back to me by the end of December.