Post by patmcgowan on Jan 13, 2016 23:18:19 GMT -8
Hello, I have a good quality final draft of a novel about 68,000 words and would like some feedback on it. I expect to self publish it on smashwords in the near future.
It's a quest novel, a young man's search for white jade in Australia, thought not to exist here. So the journey takes us through various regional towns in different states of Australia. I believe it's easy to read.
I would like some feedback on characters and their purpose, storyline and language.
I would also like a take on overall level of satisfaction, and also any feelings about story gaps that could be filled.
Happy to send word or pdf. Will ensure you get a big thank you inside the final work.
if you want a sense of my writing, you can check out some previous novels on smashwords.com under my name. They were read pre-publication by family and friends, but now I am expanding my field.
The name of the novel is: Thank You for Finding Me
the subtitle: Manton mine and the myth of white jade in Australia
Best wishes
Pat McGowan
Sydney
It's a quest novel, a young man's search for white jade in Australia, thought not to exist here. So the journey takes us through various regional towns in different states of Australia. I believe it's easy to read.
I would like some feedback on characters and their purpose, storyline and language.
I would also like a take on overall level of satisfaction, and also any feelings about story gaps that could be filled.
Happy to send word or pdf. Will ensure you get a big thank you inside the final work.
if you want a sense of my writing, you can check out some previous novels on smashwords.com under my name. They were read pre-publication by family and friends, but now I am expanding my field.
The name of the novel is: Thank You for Finding Me
the subtitle: Manton mine and the myth of white jade in Australia
Best wishes
Pat McGowan
Sydney