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Post by Brooke Gazer on May 1, 2017 13:05:37 GMT -8
This is a completed memoir about my transition from the corporate world to b&b host in a small seaside resort in Mexico, where my husband and I have been running this business for 17 years. It has been copy edited but I want a few opinions before move forward. Things I need to know are… if there is a sufficient balance between narrative and scenes? Are my descriptions sufficient? Is there a reasonable narrative arch? Essentially does it hold the readers interest?
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Post by Me Murph on May 28, 2017 12:51:57 GMT -8
This sounds like the type of book I would want to read! I like human interest/life stories, in addition to other genres, and have read them in the past by choice. I recently beta read for someone and it went so well, I decided I wanted to do it again. They told me that my feedback "was the most complete, helpful review" and that "it was invaluable and definitely improved the final product". I think this would be a good match for me. Please consider contacting me to discuss further.
Thank you,
memurph_@hotmail.com
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Post by ayewoxu on Apr 21, 2019 13:16:14 GMT -8
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Post by otaqoku on Apr 21, 2019 15:20:16 GMT -8
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Post by etqalxuequt on Jun 9, 2019 21:05:52 GMT -8
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Post by idcuwooj on Jun 9, 2019 23:03:50 GMT -8
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