luna
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Post by luna on May 19, 2013 5:48:15 GMT -8
Hi - I have a Masters in English Lit, have written both fiction and non-fiction, and will be brutally honest in reading your stuff. I remember the first time someone actually slammed my poetry - I cried, stopped writing for months, and then got back in and wrote some of my best work. I also like to write trivia questions - super way to learn! If you send it, I will read!!!
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Post by andypeloquin on Mar 26, 2014 10:24:19 GMT -8
I'd be interested in sending you an ARC of my book and getting feedback as well as a review posted on sites like Amazon and Goodreads. Do you do that?
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Post by Shawn Raiford on Dec 13, 2014 4:14:09 GMT -8
Howdy!
I am an indie writer and need someone to beta-read/proofread my short horror story "Motel".
Not sure how this works so I'll leave my email address: shawnraiford@yahoo.com
Thank you!
Shawn Raiford
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Post by ethellewis on Dec 15, 2014 15:23:19 GMT -8
Seeking Beta Readers ---Romance, mystery
Hello,
Looking for a few beta readers for my novel, "Leave Yesterday Behind." I have edited twice now and am now looking for some outside opinions.
Looking for a beta who will mostly focus on the "big picture" aspect of the novel (ie. plot pacing, character development, confusing passages) rather than grammar.
A brief synopsis -
Becky's journey into adulthood wasn't always a smooth one. Along the way, she was beset with many upheavals. Some were heartbreaking, . . . some were even more horrific.
Her best friend, Mandy, the 'sister-soul' she met in college, proved to be an even more important aid in Becky's self-discovery. With Becky, at every turn, Mandy's love and undying friendship seemed to be Becky's only lifeline. Her only hope.
But, . . . would Mandy's help and devotion be enough? Would Becky survive? Or would her demons pull her down into the depths of her own personal hell?
Would Becky ever be able to finally, . . . Leave Yesterday Behind?
Please contact me at hiroller401@yahoo.com if you might be interested.
Thanks,
Ethel Lewis
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EN
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Post by EN on Jan 29, 2015 4:34:14 GMT -8
Seeking Beta Readers for my novella. Just finished, and needs a look-over before it goes to press.
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Post by GR on Apr 25, 2015 23:18:55 GMT -8
I'm looking for a brutal beta-reader. But I want an objective opinion, not a personal one. If you can give this to me, I'll send you the manuscript. My email: gr-oliver@excite.com
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Post by Sam Pearce on Jul 6, 2015 5:42:03 GMT -8
Hi Luna,
is your offer still 'live'?
I'd like to send you the first six chapters of my new fantasy, sci-fi, alternative reality novel. The novel is complete but is quite a beast so I've selected the opening section to be critiqued.
The extract is 88 pages or just shy of 31,000 words long.
The story revolves around a dystopian theme, a human culture has evolved on a distant planet and been usurped by a fallen entity who has plundered the world she has occupied. This is, of course, unknown to those who live there and a final rescue mission is dispatched to help the locals get back on track and restore balance. The planet plays a key role in the greater scheme of things, far more significant than anyone there is aware of and the usurper guards her power jealously and ruthlessly.
Issues of parallel and convergent evolution are explored and a world remarkably like our own is portrayed in which self discovery, threat, suspense and a classic struggle between opposing forces all play out.
Contact me if you'd like to read it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon,
Sam
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Post by Sam Pearce on Jul 6, 2015 5:59:24 GMT -8
Hi Luna,
is your offer still 'live'?
I'd like to send you the first six chapters of my new fantasy, sci-fi, alternative reality novel. The novel is complete but is quite a beast so I've selected the opening section to be critiqued.
The extract is 88 pages or just shy of 31,000 words long.
The story revolves around a dystopian theme, a human culture has evolved on a distant planet and been usurped by a fallen entity who has plundered the world she has occupied. This is, of course, unknown to those who live there and a final rescue mission is dispatched to help the locals get back on track and restore balance. The planet plays a key role in the greater scheme of things, far more significant than anyone there is aware of and the usurper guards her power jealously and ruthlessly.
Issues of parallel and convergent evolution are explored and a world remarkably like our own is portrayed in which self discovery, threat, suspense and a classic struggle between opposing forces all play out.
Contact me if you'd like to read it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon,
Sam
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Post by michaelmuss on Jan 21, 2016 18:56:16 GMT -8
Hey Luna,
I was wondering if you would be interested in reading the first 5 chapters of a Machiavellian themed guide to Fantasy Football. I'm looking for feedback from both Fantasy Football die-hards as well as readers with little familiarity to the subject.
Please let me know if you are still interested, any feedback from a brutally honest would be incredibly helpful.
Email me at mylifeismuss@gmail.com and I will send you my manuscript.
Thanks,
Michael
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Post by sonofspeedracer on Jan 22, 2016 2:29:50 GMT -8
I am seeking beta reader for my 130k thriller, Killing in Kamchatka.
It's a “Tom Clancy meets The Relic” thriller, where one man's life is forever altered when the line between predator and prey blurs as he finds himself entangled in a cover-up.
I have been working on this novel since 2011. It has gone through several drafts and I wanted to bring this latest version out into the sunlight of beta readers. It is not erotic, and there is no cursing, but people die violently.
if interested email me at augustuslongstreet@gmail.com
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